First of all, Thank you for taking the time to read and reveiw this chapter and I hope you continue to do so as the story progresses-chapter two is being typed up today.
I've noticed a few so I fix them when I catch them, and will continue to do so, therefore nitpicking is no problem and actually sort of appreciated.
Well thought out eh? Well to be honest I didnt think out all that much for chapter one just kinda flowed from mind to hand to pen to paper. I put in the Ministry because it helped build some background for a lot of the characters as well as being fun to write looking more at what they have done opposed to what they haven't. I'm glad you enjoyed it as well.
Once again thanks for your time. I am glad i was able to entertain you and I hope to continue to do so. Remember chapter 2 The Onset of Fog will be up soon.