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Reviewer: Zetera (Signed)
05/01/2006 07:59 am
Interesting start - a few spelling mistakes that you might like to check over. Sorry - I can't help nitpicking! It was well thought out, and I enjoyed what was a rare insight into the Ministry of Magic.

Author's Response:


 First of all, Thank you for taking the time to read and reveiw this chapter and I hope you continue to do so as the story progresses-chapter two is being typed up today.

I've noticed a few so I fix them when I catch them, and will continue to do so, therefore nitpicking is no problem and actually sort of appreciated.

Well thought out eh? Well to be honest I didnt think out all that much for chapter one just kinda flowed from mind to hand to pen to paper.  I put in the Ministry because it helped build some background for a lot of the characters as well as being fun to write looking more at what they have done opposed to what they haven't. I'm glad you enjoyed it as well.

 Once again thanks for your time. I am glad i was able to entertain you and I hope to continue to do so.  Remember chapter 2 The Onset of Fog will be up soon.

Chapter 1 A Sense of Peace
Reviewer: Lionz_4_the_Cup (Signed)
03/26/2006 05:25 pm
nice start. i noticed some minor grammar errors, but overall, nice job. i like the idea of Moody being headmaster, and i liked how you incuded Borgin. people usually don't see a lot of him in fics. again, good start.

Author's Response:


Thanks firstly, I was wondering How people would like the Moody and Borgin ideas.  Yeah I've noticed a few errors too...mostly due to the fact that I was having technical difficulties and had to type it twice at 12am till about 5am when I finished the second time and I was a little chapter should be better grammaticly speaking.

Thanks again for the review...glad you enjoyed it and I hope you continue to read as it progresses

~Spawn of Salazar / Logan

Chapter 1 A Sense of Peace
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