i should have mentioned earlier, i like how you have a diferent chapter be a Maraurder. nice job with this chapter, too. i could see James' and Sirius' and peter's reations clearly (if that makes any sense at all). nice job.
Author's Response: Yes, it makes perfect sense, and thank you, for I thought about their carefully before writing them.
This was a nice start, and a nice version to show how they all met. Your characterisations of the Marauders just get better and better by the story. I wonder where you'll take this. Great job!
Author's Response: I work very hard on my characterisation, so you don't know how much it means to me that it impresses you!