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Reviewer: LunaMoon224 (Signed)
03/25/2006 07:08 pm
I love how you did this. I had invisioned Holly and Ashley like that, but didn't really have a picture in my head for Claire. I'm happy I do now, though. And yeah, your writing has definitely improved, along with your vocabulary. Great job!


A Closer Examination of Harry's Children
Reviewer: Lionz_4_the_Cup (Signed)
03/25/2006 06:28 pm
i really liked the story. i would have liked to see this with more of an in-sight into the grils' lives, but the story was great all the same :D



A Closer Examination of Harry's Children
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