Reviews For Vampyr

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Reviewer: MinervaEvenstar (Signed)
03/28/2006 05:47 pm
You're an excellent humour writer, but I personally think dark, angsty works are your strongest talent. *applauds*

Author's Response: Yay, thank you! Personally I agree, even though there are so many more humour fans out there. I suppose people just find it easier to get into humour.



Chapter 3: Visions of the Golden Glade
Reviewer: BonnieLvr87 (Signed)
03/26/2006 10:47 am

Page 1
Your imagery is superb. Sheets of rain. Icy wind. Rippling robes. It is all, indeed, excellent.

Very nice work.

Page 2
Very nice, again. That Avril Vampyr is one menacing creature.



Author's Response: Thank you so much, I feel the story improves as it progresses, so hopefully you'll continue to enjoy it. By page one, page two, do you mean chapter one, chapter two? I didn't think it had been validated yet.



Chapter 1: The Return
Reviewer: Madeline Fabray (Signed)
03/25/2006 11:16 pm
That was one heck of a beginning. Although we don't see him, you capture Voldemort's menace nicely. Wonderful job with Snape's tightrope dance. And the vampire - Avril?-- wow, she's sinister.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm really glad you like this story from the beginning as I think it gets a lot better. It has already been completed in full actually, so updates will be frequent!



Chapter 1: The Return
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