Oh my dear god.
I'm stunned. That was horrifying. So well portrayed that I almost feel sick. How devastatingly horrible.
Your characters are developed marvelously, and you painted a very real picture of Molly, which is hard to do. Of course, that all just made the ending more painful to take...
Oh. This hurts. Brilliant job. Thank you for this. It was... chilling and effective.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm really pleased you liked it, even if it was rather sad... I did feel a bit mean, but ultimately, that's what life can be like... I'm glad you thought that I portrayed it all well, as I really wanted to do it justice, so I'm glad you thought I did! Thank you so much for the reivew!