Ooh. You know, I officially dub you the 'Wow Master' or some other random title for someone who writes fics that make me go 'wow' by the end of them. *snickers* I adooore this one, especially how you have it set up, with each point in their lives. Amazing!
Hmm... a very interesting way to tell a story.. I do believe this is the first time I have seen a fanfic written this way.