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Reviewer: Madeline Fabray (Signed)
03/18/2006 08:00 pm
Heh, what an unusual family unit, but it works. My jaw about dropped when I realized who Savannah was, or at least, I am assuming. Is she the daughter of the agent that insulted Allesandra? Very interesting twist! Allesandra getting custody is a wee bit of a stretch, but the story is good.


Getting Accepted
Reviewer: Madeline Fabray (Signed)
03/18/2006 07:47 pm
Heh, were some of the lines a nod to "Look Who's Talking"? Just wondering :) Also got a kick out of Allesandra threatening the "father," considering whom he is...was...whatever. She could conceivably have made good on such threats, heh heh heh.


Prologue: The Birth
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