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Reviewer: Aaron (Anonymous)
01/28/2007 09:19 am
A sad chapter, Remus, Tonks and Ginny gone.  The last links to his parents are gone, with Ginny, but it was Ginny that nearly destroyed him,  Interesting wake up call by Mali.  Tom attended his love funeral but Harry won't attend his, ouch those are fighting words.   and this starts the eventual (and ironic) relationship between Malicia and Harry, love to see what happens next in all your stories. keep it up


Death Brings Friendship
Reviewer: MissGinGin (Signed)
11/05/2006 12:42 pm
I love the entire story so far.  I just started reading it and couldn't keep myself away.  Hope there is more because I'm hooked.


Chapter 29
Reviewer: Aaron (Anonymous)
08/27/2006 08:00 am
Another chapter, great chapter, some air was cleared between Mali and her mother, but a lot of the trust between them is gone, it's going to take some time to rebuild. and Harry telling Allie to send Kiara back to Tom, ouch.  and of course the usual routine, and then the thing that changes Mali's and Harry's lives forever, this is the start of the most ironic relationship i have ever read. Great chapter, hopefully you'll continue on with the other 2 stories you WIP right now. keep it up


Chapter 29
Reviewer: Madeline Fabray (Signed)
05/28/2006 11:44 pm
About time! They need to talk -- it's been overdue for quite some time :) Malicia's confusion and bitterness work well, heh, and I like her retort to Harry. Especially the remark about the bullseye.


At Last They Begin To Talk
Reviewer: Madeline Fabray (Signed)
05/13/2006 10:17 pm

Wow, Voldemort is manipulative! But we knew that...

Great history and background on thie vampires. Good luck with that series -- give it a shot!




A Letter From Him
Reviewer: Madeline Fabray (Signed)
05/13/2006 10:08 pm
Oh Ron, Ron, Ron. Good tension between Malicia and Allesandra. Knew it was coming, still like watching a train wreck in slow mo.


A Loud Confrontation
Reviewer: Madeline Fabray (Signed)
05/13/2006 10:03 pm
How do you do that? The chess scene between Malicia and Voldemort was both sweet and scary. Sweet that Voldemort can be touched by the fact that she is learning from him, and acknowledges it. And scary because she is learning from him...and acknowledges it.


Checkmate. Twice.
Reviewer: Madeline Fabray (Signed)
05/13/2006 09:57 pm
Yipes! But that is what dictators do= silence the opposition and those who spread the truth. Or at least a contrary view.


Voldemort To The Rescue
Reviewer: Madeline Fabray (Signed)
05/13/2006 09:50 pm
That exploding sound is the sound of one huge -- albiet anticipated -- bomb going off. Although methinks Tom is giving himself waaaay too much credit in the genetics department. The temper and dislike for authority also is Allesandra, heh heh. Poor Malicia never had a chance ;)


Malicia Finds Out The Truth
Reviewer: Madeline Fabray (Signed)
05/13/2006 09:45 pm
Hmmm...I really think someone would have come to Dya in person about Dumbledore, but otherwise, great chapter. Malicia's thoughts on Voldemort -- the hate-yet-fascination -- are believable.


Voldemort Reveals The Beginning Of The Fued
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