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This isn't one of your better one's. The angst wasn't there as it should be. I would think the fact that it was a drabble (and those are the toughest to write) is one of the reasons.
I still believe that you're still one of the most underrated authors around :)
Oh wow...
I am honestly tearing up, which I don't do often. A brilliant piece of fiction, a wonderful portrail of characters we know little about. A fave for me!!!
Wonderful, wonderful ficlet.
I loved it to bits. You did such a good job with the characterizations, the descriptions and the flow.
It was a flawless piece. The only thing that struck me a bit off was Hannah's description. I always thought she was a bit on the plump side. I seem to remember something about this in CoS. Oh well... it doesn't really matter. It didnt affect the fic at all.
It was ace ;)