I like the idea of such an order, but I must confess that you really need to revise your language. Capitals are missing from time to time and sometimes you really have awkward phrasings. I would want to beta it for you, if you wouldn't mind. Otherwise, I was about to ask if I couldn't use the idea of such an order :P
Oh yeah, watch it with Vikram. He's beginning to sound as the perfect wizard. Make sure he has his flaws, even Dumbledore had them. A quick reminder of course that Dumbledore and Voldemort were supposed to be the most powerful wizards of the world...