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Reviewer: Konrad (Signed)
08/01/2006 01:58 pm

I like the idea of such an order, but I must confess that you really need to revise your language. Capitals are missing from time to time and sometimes you really have awkward phrasings. I would want to beta it for you, if you wouldn't mind. Otherwise, I was about to ask if I couldn't use the idea of such an order :P

Oh yeah, watch it with Vikram. He's beginning to sound as the perfect wizard. Make sure he has his flaws, even Dumbledore had them. A quick reminder of course that Dumbledore and Voldemort were supposed to be the most powerful wizards of the world...




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Reviewer: Golden_Snitch (Signed)
04/05/2006 12:37 pm
See my review for the previous chapter, I've got the same things to say about it!


Meeting the minister
Reviewer: Golden_Snitch (Signed)
04/05/2006 12:32 pm
Good, very good. I like a bit of mystery!


Prologue
Reviewer: hpbooklover127 (Anonymous)
03/29/2006 12:38 am

are you indian.

haaa. because you used the name vikram... and ravi.

 

and that makes me laugh like crazy. im indian.

sweeet.




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Reviewer: Zayne (Signed)
03/13/2006 05:56 pm
Another excellent chapter, I'm sooo curious about the Obsidian Order now :) I especially liked the part about Mr. Weasley and The git (Percy, of course) Great job!


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Reviewer: Lionz_4_the_Cup (Signed)
03/13/2006 03:56 pm
this sounds like an interesting story so far. I like all the diffen=rent characters, too. good job.



Prologue
Reviewer: Zayne (Signed)
03/13/2006 10:44 am
Very nice start to what I imagine will be a great story- I especially like Vikram. He sounds yummy ;) Great job, looking forward to more!


Prologue
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