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Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
03/13/2006 04:02 pm

Good job with this, although it could use a little grammatical work. It was a nice look at what might happen for the final battle; my favorite part was the line, "'Time for the last chapter,' Harry thought, a bit absent-minded." It was perfectly timed, and it made me smile.

Thanks for this, and do take care!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the incentive, ladylarna.

About the grammar, English is my second language, I try to work hard on this but mistakes pass me by. But I promise I'll keep trying harder, ok?




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Reviewer: Zayne (Signed)
03/12/2006 11:41 pm
Oh, wow. Absolutely amazing, I really liked it! Especially the part about tomorrow, today, and yesterday. Great job!


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