How fun! I love that Hermione is the one who convinces her parents to look for Diagon Alley. And it makes sense that the Longbottoms would be the ones to help her get through the barrier, as the Weasleys helpsed Harry.
Ooh, I love your look on how Hermione was before Hogwarts. I think you got Hermione and her parents characterized absolutely perfectly, and I always wondered how exactly she met Neville. Her parents disbelief of Hogwarts was nicely displayed, too, and you had Hermione's stubborness nicely done. I loved it!
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