Reviews For Phoenix Song

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Reviewer: Cody DeDannan (Signed)
04/12/2006 01:30 am

Oo!  I like this one very much!  Great descriptions and great characterization on Riddle.  If I were to offer a constructive critisism, it would be a small one.  Some of your narration is a little awkward.   I caught a couple of fragments that interupted the flow, and one non-narrator-ish thing (which potter knew by name, incidentally) that sort of broke the spell slightly for me. 

But again I enjoyed the alternate POV a great deal! 




Phoenix Song
Reviewer: Cody DeDannan (Signed)
04/12/2006 01:30 am

Oo!  I like this one very much!  Great descriptions and great characterization on Riddle.  If I were to offer a constructive critisism, it would be a small one.  Some of your narration is a little awkward.   I caught a couple of fragments that interupted the flow, and one non-narrator-ish thing (which potter knew by name, incidentally) that sort of broke the spell slightly for me. 

But again I enjoyed the alternate POV a great deal! 




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Reviewer: Madeline Fabray (Signed)
03/08/2006 12:59 am
Oh, very nice contrast to Chamber of Secrets! I love how you describe how Tom Riddle hears the phoenix song -- ominous.


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Reviewer: Lionz_4_the_Cup (Signed)
03/07/2006 04:00 pm
sorry, had to cut the last one short. i really liked the descriptions, and how you made it your own. nice job.


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Reviewer: Lionz_4_the_Cup (Signed)
03/06/2006 08:01 pm
good job. very nice writing.


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