A Valentine's Day Breakaway
Reviews For Something New
Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
03/07/2006 03:41 pm
“You dropped it pretty far, didn’t you?”
Haha! Oh, this was cute! I love how canon you made it, and you completely rocked this missing moment. Your characterizations are really good... analytical!Penelope matches unsure!Percy very well here, although they did move a bit fast. Still, cute job and an excellent job with this challenge!
Reviewer: Madeline Fabray (Signed)
02/24/2006 06:21 pm
Adorable! A few sentences need tweaked structurally for better flow, particularly in the beginning, but you capture Percy's demeanor, and his awkwardness, superbly. This story made me grin from beginning to end. I loved Percy's thoughts about wanting some of the Gryffindor courage.
A Valentine's Day Breakaway