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Reviewer: Lionz_4_the_Cup (Signed)
02/26/2006 04:04 pm
you know what i like about this story? its a way original idea, with new surprises in every chapter. great job. 10/10


Chapter Five: Out of the Fire...
Reviewer: Lionz_4_the_Cup (Signed)
02/26/2006 03:52 pm
what a choice. Its your choice, Harry Potter. Your own doom, or the doom of the world around you. also, its cool that you brought Frank Bryce into this, as Wrath, i think, wasnt it? anyways, great job, 10/10.


Chapter Four: Interrogation
Reviewer: Lionz_4_the_Cup (Signed)
02/26/2006 03:43 pm
wow. i liked the whole "giving muggles limited magic" idea, very nice. i also liked the two other people Hermione meets, and that last sentence, " So am I a guest, or a prisoner? " great job.


Chapter Three: The Mystery Army
Reviewer: Lionz_4_the_Cup (Signed)
02/26/2006 03:33 pm
very nice, good job. i liked the part about the floating "island", it was original, as was the raven. definately a favorite. 10/10.


Chapter Two: Trailing After Breadcrumbs
Reviewer: Lionz_4_the_Cup (Signed)
02/24/2006 12:28 pm
oooh, very nice ending there :D great writing, with the whole alarm going off. awesome job.


Chapter One: Attack
Reviewer: Lionz_4_the_Cup (Signed)
02/23/2006 07:37 pm
no sequal, just parts. got it. anyways, Air Raid, hmm. will have to read and find out what happens next. :D


Prologue: Celebration
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