this was absolutely brilliant!!!! one of the best fanfics i have ever read, and i have read a lot of them! i love l/j fics and this is outstanding. well written, good length, captures the characters well, i didn't notice any mistakes, very sweet (esp the l/j moment) and vvvv sad! 10/10 well done!!!!!! x
You did an incredible job showing Harry's thoughts and painting a warm, family scene. It seems so normal, so sweet -- all the more heartbreaking to read given what we know will happen. The ending felt a bit rushed, but overall, a good story. I really liked James and Lily's imaginings of Harry attending Hogwarts, especially the line about a little red-haired girl. If they only knew ... :)
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