Battle scenes are tough, but you handled it well. Angel's use to the sword on TOm was a fitting touch. And awww...shucks! My pleasure to follow this. Hard to believe its almost over!
Angel blinked a couple times as Harry trailed off. "That's quite a story you have. Anyone ever tell you that your life would make a great book?"
Heh heh, you should submit that as a quote :D
I see things are wrapping up. You know, I almost feel sorry for Tom. Almost. I wonder what his reaction is going to be when/if he realizes Angel betrayed him?