Reviews For Hero

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Reviewer: Courtrney (Anonymous)
03/23/2006 01:02 am
Good story. I liked it a lot! Keep writing.

Author's Response: thanks very much! happy you liked it :)

Reviewer: Moonlit Tiger Lily (Anonymous)
02/24/2006 01:01 am
You know, I knew something was wrong with that. I like how you made it a sad/happy ending. Most people aren't realistic about things. You've got my respect for that. On the other hand, I think you could use a lot more work with background and description. Everything felt rushed and like a blur. I never really got settled in a room, you know. The settings were always hazy. The dialogue was great, though and you did well keeping everyone in character, which can be hard to do. Good job!

Author's Response: First off, thank you for your honesty. I'm happy someone has the guts to come out and tell me how it is. Second off, I guess it was not clear as to where everything was -- but thank you. I'm happy you thought it was good :o)

Reviewer: Madeline Fabray (Anonymous)
02/21/2006 07:37 pm
Your first paragraph was just amazing, with its descriptions -- I like the spider web allusion. Ver bittersweet ending, especially the line "they'll be here shortly." Wow.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review, that paragraph was originally for another one of my stories but then morphed into what is now 'Hero.' Thanks so much for reviewing -- it means a lot!

Reviewer: LunaMoon224 (Signed)
02/16/2006 06:48 pm
Wow, I adored this. So many lines played with my emotions, and when Ginny found out they were dead, I immediately felt sorry for them. The last line was perfect...So very true. Great job!!

Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much! I really appreciate that! I was hoping for this story to have an effect on people and I guess it did. Thanks for your kind review, I'm happy I was able to entertain you for a bit.

Reviewer: Ashlyn Alexander (Signed)
02/16/2006 06:12 pm
I absolutely loved this fic!! It shocked me, but it was wonderful!! The ending was beautiful. It gave me goose bumps just reading it. Great job!! :) Ash

Author's Response: Thank you so much Ashlyn!! I really do love this story -- I think it might be one of my best. I'm happy you enjoyed it and thanks for the review =]

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