Reviews For Twist of Fate

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Reviewer: Calamur (Signed)
05/12/2006 04:35 pm
Nice Malfoy? Well this is going to be interesting :-)



New Song, New Girl
Reviewer: Calamur (Signed)
05/12/2006 04:30 pm

Interesting start to what looks like a promising fic

 




Prologue
Reviewer: lily 101 (Anonymous)
05/12/2006 04:12 pm
Trying to make malfoy good are we? well whatever flots your baot.



New Song, New Girl
Reviewer: Battle Fries (Signed)
02/27/2006 01:55 pm
Heh. Dudley wants to learn magic to help block out the nasty nightmares of "rabbit food" being forced down his throat. If only his parents knew.... Good stuff. I'm curious as to the identity of the girl. You say she looks like Lily, but is it Lily? Maybe sometime in the past, when she was younger, not to mention alive? And is it just me, or do I sense a Harry/Hermione pairing in the wroks here? ;-) Just a few spelling and grammar errors here and there. Make sure to keep your story in one tense (the sentence, 'Harry stopped and notices he was thinking again,' is the only time I could see mixed tenses, and I imagine it was probably a typo. All-in-all, not a bad prologue. Let's see where it goes!


Prologue
Reviewer: Lionz_4_the_Cup (Signed)
02/18/2006 02:35 pm
that was intriguing! i cant wait to see what happens! great writing.


Prologue
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