Very Sweet, I loved it.
aww, that was so sweet. nice writing, i wondered why Fleur didnt have her accent in the beginning, but you cleared that up :) nice writing, again. i loved the ending, i cant wait for more. 10/10
Author's Response: The REAL reason I didn't add Fleur's accent is, it just scews me up, and it ends up sounding REALLY bad. Thanks for the review!!
That was so intriguing. I love how you write Harry and Ginny. You wrote Ginny's feelings of worry when the fight was going on perfectly. I only have one thing, I saw a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes. You may want to have someone look it over, but they didn't really bother me, I just wanted to point it out. :D Great job!!!
Author's Response: I actually did spelling and grammer check on my computer, so I'm sorry if I didn't catch them, I was relying on my computer to do it!!