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Reviewer: Madeline Fabray (Signed)
03/08/2006 03:42 pm
Oh the politics is getting interesting. I just have to wonder who those four scouts hacked off on Council to become sacrificial lambs. Ironic, what Allesandra is -- both a destroyer and a uniter. I see a civil war soon, unless something changes


Four Messengers And Allesandra
Reviewer: Madeline Fabray (Signed)
03/08/2006 03:35 pm
I love the debates and arguments in the beginning. It sounds like people debating the truth of a folktale, albeit a living one. Interesting observations on both sides, and I have to wonder -- what did Allesandra have up her sleeve regarding the four teens. In fact, I can't help but wonder if they were set up somehow. there are a whole lot of "coincidences" here.


The Council Of Wizards And Witches
Reviewer: Moonlit Tiger Lily (Signed)
02/22/2006 11:05 pm
Thanks for the mention, Ashley. You're doing greatly and I can see you getting better every day. It's a shame there aren't more people readying this story, but be sure I'll be plugging it!


Four Messengers And Allesandra
Reviewer: lillyb2124 (Signed)
02/19/2006 09:34 pm
I like it, smart work.


Prologue: Death, Destruction, And The Origins Of A Dark Witch
Reviewer: Madeline Fabray (Signed)
02/12/2006 10:41 am
Wow, chilling! I forgot to mention this before, but you do draw up a good picture as to why many wizards hate Muggles. Mind you, there doesnt always have to be a reason for prejudice, but I like the reason you give here.


Chapter 1: The Battle of Blood Hill
Reviewer: Madeline Fabray (Signed)
02/12/2006 10:37 am
Oh, I'm so glad to see you writing this story! Allesandra, from what I had seen of her in A New Darkness, was so intriguing. A great, gripping start. We can see where Allesandra gets her dark views.


Prologue: Death, Destruction, And The Origins Of A Dark Witch
Reviewer: Moonlit Tiger Lily (Signed)
02/10/2006 06:53 pm
Patience, as a beta, is something I have plenty of. I like this story a lot and I am anxious to see where you head with it. I've hardly ever seen an author so willing to accept criticism or one who learned so quickly. Congratulations on getting puclished here. I'm sure, when you're ready, you will be a fully-fledged author out in the real world. Just keep on pushing like you have been. Good luck, and great job. Nicole


Prologue: Death, Destruction, And The Origins Of A Dark Witch
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