Patience, as a beta, is something I have plenty of. I like this story a lot and I am anxious to see where you head with it. I've hardly ever seen an author so willing to accept criticism or one who learned so quickly. Congratulations on getting puclished here. I'm sure, when you're ready, you will be a fully-fledged author out in the real world. Just keep on pushing like you have been. Good luck, and great job.
Prologue: Death, Destruction, And The Origins Of A Dark Witch