If i may make a suggestion. When writing in the future you shouldn't squish everything into one paragraph because it hurt our eyes to read it this way. ONly a suggestion though and i like the story so far. lets see where it leads us
If i may make a suggestion. When writing in the future you shouldn't squish everything into one paragraph because it hurt our eyes to read it this way. ONly a suggestion though and i like the story so far. lets see where it leads us