You must login (register) to review.

Reviewer: jellybeanbaby26 (Signed)
02/13/2006 09:36 pm
oooooooooooo interesting.....................i may not like the whole harry/hermione thing but still......................very intriguing and i cant wait to find out what happens next


The Confession
Reviewer: LunaMoon224 (Signed)
02/12/2006 11:13 am
I like how you write Harry and Ginny. I was snickering at the "You win." Hehe, that line is my favorite. I'm curious as to where you're going to take this. It's very intirguing, I only have one suggestion, since this chapter is mostly dialogue, I would put a little more detail into this. Other than that, great job!!


The Confession
Reviewer: Lionz_4_the_Cup (Signed)
02/09/2006 03:16 pm
that was very good. nice writing. cant wait for more, i loved this first chapter.


The Confession
You must login (register) to review.