You packed a ton of emotion and tension in there. It was dynamite.
I trule adore your ability to get under the skin of the characters you write so well.
Very nice. :D Liked the whole of it, the facts mixing with images that made it almost surreal at times. Rather liked the repetion of "her" through the first few lines, as if asserting the actuality. Aussi, I especially liked the bit regarding Draco and observation or lack thereof on the parts of his fellows. Those cuh-razy students. *thumbs up*