Chapter 12
Reviews For Second Chance
Reviewer: destin4fl (Anonymous)
03/13/2006 02:50 pm
Reviewer: destin4fl (Anonymous)
03/13/2006 02:40 pm
Reviewer: destin4fl (Anonymous)
03/13/2006 02:32 pm
i'm catching up on this fic and i'm really luving the way you metion hermione's noticing harry smell... very romantic.
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Reviewer: jessy (Anonymous)
03/01/2006 05:23 pm
Reviewer: huygtgyhtmggh (Anonymous)
03/01/2006 04:51 pm
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Reviewer: destin4fl (Signed)
02/22/2006 06:46 pm
very good. i'm not much of a h/h fan but the backround story i believable and the plot is excellent.
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Reviewer: Madeline Fabray (Signed)
02/12/2006 10:52 am
Oh, I like this chapter, it's your strongest yet. The broomride was so bittersweet. And I have to wonder what Ron has cooked up.
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Reviewer: Madeline Fabray (Signed)
02/12/2006 10:48 am
You can cut that tension at the end with a knife. I love the concept of Arthur and Molly as grandparents, it fits.
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Reviewer: Madeline Fabray (Signed)
02/08/2006 10:49 pm
Hmmm...I can see there's going to be trouble with the relationship with Eric. And relationship with Harry will have its difficulties, too. Ron and Luna...that's original!
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