wow, very intriguing start! you had me hooked til the end, great job. awesome descriptions and detail, very origial and well thought out. good job.
Wow, this story is very intirguing, I love all the detail you put into this, it really adds to the story. I would have never guessed that was Severus, but it makes sense. The idea of the Selenai is so original. I have only one thing: I don't think there's an apparation spell, but that's okay. Hehe. Great job!!!