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Reviewer: Lionz_4_the_Cup (Signed)
02/28/2006 05:23 pm
wow, very intriguing start! you had me hooked til the end, great job. awesome descriptions and detail, very origial and well thought out. good job.


Chapter 1
Reviewer: LunaMoon224 (Signed)
02/12/2006 11:07 am
Wow, this story is very intirguing, I love all the detail you put into this, it really adds to the story. I would have never guessed that was Severus, but it makes sense. The idea of the Selenai is so original. I have only one thing: I don't think there's an apparation spell, but that's okay. Hehe. Great job!!!


Chapter 1
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