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Reviewer: Ham (Signed)
02/03/2006 05:10 am
I liked your plot immensely. The time wolf idea is very unique... but the flow of your chapter gets random at times and needs a bit of work... maybe a bit more description would help.


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Reviewer: Warlock (Anonymous)
02/02/2006 05:17 pm
Tres bon! Like it.


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