Reviews For Seven Tasks

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Reviewer: hedwig_edwiges (Signed)
02/13/2006 06:05 am
ok, here interesting, but i'm with Harry: really annoying! So update soon so we can find out what's em merlin's beard is going on!

Author's Response: Yep, after I finish this response I am starting chapter 5. Some answers are waiting for you! :) Thanks for the review!

Beginning
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Reviewer: hedwig_edwiges (Signed)
02/05/2006 01:31 pm
It's a well written start and quite interesting. But I, personally, don't like stories that drabble a lot and take too much time to go some place or explain things. i hope you start to show some clear road in the next chapter.

Author's Response: Yep, the next chapter is titled "Revealing" so I think I gave some good information about what's going on. The main focus of the story starts there.

Appearing
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Reviewer: HermioneWeasley1972 (Anonymous)
01/31/2006 04:34 pm
This is a wonderful beginning and I look forward to reading more. I noticed just one spelling error...in the third paragraph after the introduction instead of lied, try laid or lay. Other than that, good job! I look forward to reading more. :)

Author's Response: Fixed! Thanks for the kind words and the correction!

Falling
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Reviewer: LunaMoon224 (Signed)
01/30/2006 05:06 pm
Wow, I loved it!! You described everything so well. It all kept my attention, and perked my curiousity...It was so very intriguing. I can't wait to find out why Harry was like that. Great job!!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review (and for the welcome on the forum)! It is much appreciated! :)

Falling
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