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Reviewer: Cody DeDannan (Signed)
04/12/2006 05:10 am

Wow.  This was a very chilling, and I admit a depressing story.  i don't usually read stories that will depress me, but this one I coudln't quite get away from.  Very well done.  And there *was* that surge of hope at the end.  It was, I think, a believable way for Malfoy to have turned...and still be kept in character.

 

If I were to offer a bit of constructive critisism...I was a little disappointed in the kiss.  It seemed a little out of place to me, especially with hermione and Draco.  No matter how much hermione believes in the good of people, I can't believe her kissing Draco after all he's done. Trying to redeem him...yes.  But the kiss...

 

Still, that's a small thing.  Well done. 




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Reviewer: Delighted225 (Anonymous)
04/07/2006 06:00 pm
Ah! This was amazing, I cried! Beautifully written


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Reviewer: Venus725 (Signed)
03/27/2006 09:24 am
Bloody fantastic! Really, you nearly made me into a pathetic sod, blubbering away in the middle of my literature class! Brilliant.

- Venus725



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Reviewer: tonkatrish (Signed)
02/22/2006 08:07 am
Wow......just wow. You have depicted hope for those who have lost in the war -- Harry's world, and ours. Thanks. The ratings don't go high enough........


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Reviewer: adara (Signed)
02/01/2006 10:25 pm
i loved the story, you're an amzing writer


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Reviewer: LunaMoon224 (Signed)
02/01/2006 10:31 am
Wow, I really loved it. I loved how you wrote Draco in this, especially. I loved how you described how the war had really brought down Hermione and Draco both. You put so much description into this. I loved how you ended it, too...Great job!!


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