Author's Response: Thanks very much! I will be posting several more chapters very soon. I hope you will continue to enjoy it. Thanks for the post.
Author's Response: Thank you for your wonderful readership and the invitation to join you here at WizardTales. I'm flattered that you've enjoyed my story enough to read it again. Thanks for your insights and flattering comments. :) I took care of the error that you found...nice catch. :)