I loved the Sprout as a therapist idea. The whole scene between Harry, McGonagall and Sprout was excellent.
Bravo!
Chapter Twenty Two: Trouble in Paradise
Reviews For The Most Ancient Magic
Reviewer: Ham (Signed)
06/14/2007 07:15 am
Wow.. poor Harry.. Hermione really went after him, didn't she. I suppose that it was fated to be. She was never going to be too happy with him for telling McGonagall.
I loved the Sprout as a therapist idea. The whole scene between Harry, McGonagall and Sprout was excellent.
Bravo!
I loved the Sprout as a therapist idea. The whole scene between Harry, McGonagall and Sprout was excellent.
Bravo!
Reviewer: Ham (Signed)
06/14/2007 07:12 am
Oh dear... this is an unseen complication. I really feel for Hermione.
Very well written.
Very well written.
Chapter Twenty One: Hermione's Terrible Secret
Reviewer: Ham (Signed)
06/14/2007 07:11 am
This was one of your best chapters.
I loved the explanations of wizarding marriage and the talk with Arthur and Molly. You constantly amaze me with your unique concepts in this fic and I love that.
I also liked that Hugh was testing Harry all along and the gesture he makes by giving them the permission to marry.
I loved the explanations of wizarding marriage and the talk with Arthur and Molly. You constantly amaze me with your unique concepts in this fic and I love that.
I also liked that Hugh was testing Harry all along and the gesture he makes by giving them the permission to marry.
Chapter Twenty: Of Magic and Marriage
Reviewer: Ham (Signed)
06/14/2007 07:07 am
I'm really loving the Hugh and Harry interactions. I've noticed that Janet isn't as developed as Hugh as a character.
I also thought the idea of Ron becoming a healer was unique and marvellous. Very nice.
Btw.. Stockholm Syndrome is when a hostage falls for his/her kidnapper or develops feelings of affection for them. It has nothing to do with this situation. I understood what you were trying to say.. but it won't be classified as Stockholm Syndrome.
I also thought the idea of Ron becoming a healer was unique and marvellous. Very nice.
Btw.. Stockholm Syndrome is when a hostage falls for his/her kidnapper or develops feelings of affection for them. It has nothing to do with this situation. I understood what you were trying to say.. but it won't be classified as Stockholm Syndrome.
Chapter Ninteen: Boxing Day
Reviewer: Ham (Signed)
06/14/2007 07:01 am
Nice christmas scene.. i liked the Goblin pendant but i wish you'd have described it a bit better.
Oh wow.. Hugh really opened the can of worms, didn't he? I felt sorry for Hermione until she said all those hurtful things back. Harry must have wondered why he ever got out of bed.
Oh wow.. Hugh really opened the can of worms, didn't he? I felt sorry for Hermione until she said all those hurtful things back. Harry must have wondered why he ever got out of bed.
Chapter Eighteen: The Best Christmas Ever
Reviewer: Ham (Signed)
06/14/2007 06:58 am
So what caused Harry's recovery? It seemed abrupt and unexplained.
Do you go into it in further chapters?
Also Harry's sneakiness with the pancakes was very cute.
Do you go into it in further chapters?
Also Harry's sneakiness with the pancakes was very cute.
Chapter Seventeen: The Problem with Pancakes
Reviewer: Ham (Signed)
06/14/2007 06:56 am
wow.. I almost thought that Harry was going to break Hermione's heart for a second.. but it was pulled off nicely. Very good scene.
Chapter Sixteen: Together
Reviewer: Ham (Signed)
06/14/2007 06:52 am
Nice filler chapter.
Btw.. did I say that i really thought Hermione's nickname was very cute?
Btw.. did I say that i really thought Hermione's nickname was very cute?
Chapter Fifteen: Christmas at the Grangers
Reviewer: Ham (Signed)
06/14/2007 06:48 am
I think the Harry and Snape scene was some of the best stuff i've seen from you. Very understated and well done.
I also like how the Ron/Luna relationship is progressing.
I did think Draco was a bit off this chapter for some reason. Dunno why.
I also like how the Ron/Luna relationship is progressing.
I did think Draco was a bit off this chapter for some reason. Dunno why.
Chapter Fourteen: Making Adjustments
Reviewer: Ham (Signed)
06/14/2007 06:45 am
Poor Hermione.. its always so difficult for her to see Harry so miserable.
I liked how you did Ron confessing in the Room Of Requirement. I think it was very unique.
The next scene where he confesses it to Harry was great too. It created a lot of tension in the air, thats for sure.
Good chapter.
I liked how you did Ron confessing in the Room Of Requirement. I think it was very unique.
The next scene where he confesses it to Harry was great too. It created a lot of tension in the air, thats for sure.
Good chapter.
Chapter Thirteen: Mending Bridges