What about Voldemort and the battle? I thought thats an important part of the fic. The whole fic Voldemort is a Dark presence hovering around. I'm a bit disappointed that you're ending it like this.
But anyway.. I do want to thank you for the great read so far. It was a pleasure.
I think that you were trying to avoid smut but still describe their love making and it was always going to be a delicate balance. But maybe you played it too safe and it lost some of the impact it could have.
But it wasn't bad by any stretch of imagination.
To be honest this was a tad disappointing. I had sort of accepted that they were dead and suddenly they aren't.
I dunno.. my opinion is that maybe they should have stayed dead.
The proposal was very sweet and unexpected and Hermione not immediately accepting was even more unexpected.. but it was a nice touch.
Glad to see that H the Terrible has died a quick death.
Oh.. and btw.. nice dueling scene.
The chapter was very touching except for that little tidbit. Things like people going back to collect belongings after an attack is hardly ever written about. It was very nce to read.
Firstly let me just say that I liked the whole support group idea. It was.. well unique.. yeah.. i've repeated that word a lot in my reviews.. but I can't help it. You've really impressed me so far.
Please tell me they aren't really dead... You couldn't have killed Hugh and Janet!
*sigh* i suppose you must have had to. The story has to have some drama.. and this was it.