Wonderfully written and very enjoyable read. The thin string that connects this story together is very well thought out and it only gets better per chapter. Looking forward to reading more :).

I saw this story come up on our 'newest' section and I thought I'd give it a read!  So far, I like what I've read.  Your description of Harry at the beginning was excellent as was the letter from Gringotts!

I like the story.  I always thought that Harry was smart as well, just like Hermione.

I like the chapter.  You can feel the despare of Ginny and Harry and all the restof the family.  But boy is Ron acting like a jerk

I like the relationship you're creating between Harry and Ginny. I think Dumbledore, Hermione and Ron are all OOC, but I think that's the point of your story.

I like that you're being consistent with your Dumbledore. He doesn't believe Harry and Harry is fighting tooth and nail for them to all believe him and trust in him. I like that stories where Harry has to struggle to come into his own. Not everything is handed to him on a silver platter.

The only thing I really don't like it Dumbledore is being stupid. Although I think the point of your Dumbledore is to create a fight for Harry, it's also becoming a little overkill. Obviously, Harry knows what he's doing. In the past Dumbledore never had any problems trusting Harry, so why now? I know the prob with the DOM, but that wasn't Harry's fault. I don't know. I guess I'm split in that thought.

I think it's a good story and I hope you'll be able to update again soon.