wow. i liked the whole "heart" thing. good job.
Author's Response: Yeah, that was good right. The whole story was really a dream I had, well I wasn't quite asleep, just somewhere between you know. And I just sat down hours later and wrote what I remembered down, and I'm not regretting it!
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Wow...that was very impressive! You have a wonderful way with words...very good! :)
Author's Response: thank you so much, more fuel for my ego!
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I loved this drabble! You truly described the world, and that's how I feel about it. I especially liked how much detail you put into the heart. Very good. 10!!
Author's Response: thank you so much, more fuel for my ego!
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