You depicted only too well the role parents play to protect their child from any emotional stresses. Despite Ginny's ordeal, she managed to set the pain aside for her child.
The Next Day
You certainly have brought home the importance of family and familial love.
You manage to draw feelings of empathy with your readers.
Heavens above. Poor Lily. She must be so confused. It is just as well that Harry is an accomplished legilimens.
It is bad enough his wife is a victim of a horrible crime, his little girl has to see the crime committed as well? You do know how to tag at the heartstrings, dear Amblewat.
The Crime Revealed
As I was reading this, I thought, "Finally, Harry and Ron are going through a life that is close to mundane and normal for the muggle equivalent of detectives , law enforcers or policemen." Then you had to end it with a sight so horrible as Harry has not been through enough already? Good one, Amblewat!