Author's Response: Thanks, there is a lot happening. I'm glad you like it, and very happy that you left a review!
Author's Response: I agree that I need more detailing, its something that I am always working to improve. It took a lot of time to work out the plot, and I have lots of pages of outlines and handwritten notes about what should happen and the characters responses, etc. Thanks so much for the review. New chapter this week, uncertain as to the day yet.
Author's Response: I will. I'm shooting for twice a week once I get things started in terms of catching your interest. Thanks for the review.
Author's Response: You'll get Ron's later, his is different from the other three. Glad you like it. Thanks for the review!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I saw each of the characters dealing with these kinds of thoughts. Glad you liked it, and hope you continue to do so.