I like this start, it's very intriguing and creative. Hehe, I was snickering at Ron and Luna, he can be so oblivious at times. I love how you wrote Draco, he's evol but not too evol. I don't mind Hermione/Draco fics, and this one looks like it's going to be a good one. Great job!!
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