wonderful.. simply wonderful...
The whole flying scene.. the scene that Ginny opens the broom.. was so well done. I loved the part where Harry lifts up Draco.. i too am wondering whats happening.. got me really curious.
The two OC's are BRILLIANT... i cant see where youre going to take them.
Loved it!!! I dont see why you didnt like the first thirty chapters... does it actually get better than this???
I was wondering why they are sleeping on couches in each others arms when there are dormitories and beds available.. I mean sure its nice.. but it feels a bit odd.
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