Ch.7 - - This is shaping up to be a really fun year. of course I know it will be serious and dangerous as well, but there looks to be a good DADA class, and you cannot make Harry a dud at his DA.
Ch.5 - - The twins are a blast at the mind, particularly their Dad-was-a-Grindelwalder revelation.
I always feel for Cho; I'd like her to be happy, but she makes it hard for all of us when she goes after Ginny's harry.
Ch.4 - - Harry and Ginny are still moving slowly - good. And perhaps her birthday will be the breaking point for them getting together. That would be good.
You have a potentially interesting characther in Milton. He is coming along slowly, but that would be the case for someone who would probably be a bit secretive.
Ch.2 - - So, Harry was as curious about the arrangements as I was, and for the same reasons. Perhaps you will tell us later about the rationale.
Fine tale so far. Loads of substance. I particularly like that Harry and Ginny just don't make life time commitments after a few days together. Teens do move quickly, but then break up as quickly. By having them go slowly, it will be more believeable when they do connect.
Ch.1 - - I already like your writing style and your creation of casual conversation. Every story needs a leap of faith at the set-up. I cannot imagine why Ron didn't go to be with Harry and Ginny with Hermione, but then where would be your story? I accept the premise because I really like the idea of it.
I look forward to reading this well known and respected tale.
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