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Reviewer: Aaran St Vines (Signed)
01/23/2006 06:47 am
Ch.14 - - I so want Isabelle to be truly part of the gang. I believe strongly in redemption messages in fiction. I particularly like the idea of Bella's daughter going good - poetic justice there.
But McGonagall's hesitations makes me a little nervous.
Fun chapter.
Reviewer: Ham (Signed)
01/23/2006 03:33 am
That is positively evil!
You cant leave us at a cliffie like that *groans* *moans* *and generally makes pathetic noises*
Wonderful chapter.
Author's Response: Don't be such a baby, Ham. You can read the next chapter soon...probably tomorrow, or maybe next week. Then again, I'm pretty busy at the moment, maybe next month would suit better. *evil grin*
Author's Response: Don't be such a baby, Ham. You can read the next chapter soon...probably tomorrow, or maybe next week. Then again, I'm pretty busy at the moment, maybe next month would suit better. *evil grin*
Quidditch
Reviewer: Ham (Signed)
01/23/2006 03:02 am
B-e-a-u-tiful chapter.
I was totally entranced till the end. Simply marvellous.
I do wonder what Draco is upto and how come he isnt more scared.
Owl Post
Reviewer: Ham (Signed)
01/23/2006 02:40 am
Stunning chapter!
It was absolutely brilliant and wonderfully written. Your best so far.
I loved hearing about James' story.
Attack of the Killer Post-It Notes
Reviewer: Aaran St Vines (Signed)
01/22/2006 11:14 pm
Reviewer: Aaran St Vines (Signed)
01/22/2006 11:01 pm
Reviewer: Aaran St Vines (Signed)
01/22/2006 10:46 pm
Ch.11 - - You are hittimg your stride producing better and better chapters.
Your ideas on Harry's new power are terrific. I like James Milton and Isabelle very much - excellent characterizations.
Fine dialogue also.
Cheers!
A Gryffindor Thing
Reviewer: Aaran St Vines (Signed)
01/22/2006 10:28 pm
Ch.10 - - EXCELLENT!
Terrific chapter. The way you have developed Isabelle is terrific. My favorite Slytherin.
James and his twins are great also.
Cheers!
Hogsmeade
Reviewer: Aaran St Vines (Signed)
01/22/2006 10:13 pm
Reviewer: Aaran St Vines (Signed)
01/22/2006 09:52 pm
Ch.8 - - I have to say I liked they way they finally kissed.
Five days, ugh! His class was delayed in starting.
Getting even better!
The Dream Plane