Ch.15 - - The brooding Harry and the insecure Ginny are not pretty pictures but you've made them a part of a very good story. Goodness has to overcome adversity.
And I do believe it will get better for the two soon.
Ch.14 - - I so want Isabelle to be truly part of the gang. I believe strongly in redemption messages in fiction. I particularly like the idea of Bella's daughter going good - poetic justice there.
But McGonagall's hesitations makes me a little nervous.
That is positively evil!
You cant leave us at a cliffie like that *groans* *moans* *and generally makes pathetic noises*
Author's Response: Don't be such a baby, Ham. You can read the next chapter soon...probably tomorrow, or maybe next week. Then again, I'm pretty busy at the moment, maybe next month would suit better. *evil grin*
I was totally entranced till the end. Simply marvellous.
I do wonder what Draco is upto and how come he isnt more scared.
It was absolutely brilliant and wonderfully written. Your best so far.
I loved hearing about James' story.
Attack of the Killer Post-It Notes
Ch.13 - - I am a broken record telling you how good this story is.
Ch.12 - - This is captivating.
Enthralling plot line.
What It Means To Be Slytherin
Ch.11 - - You are hittimg your stride producing better and better chapters.
Your ideas on Harry's new power are terrific. I like James Milton and Isabelle very much - excellent characterizations.
Fine dialogue also.
A Gryffindor Thing
Ch.10 - - EXCELLENT!
Terrific chapter. The way you have developed Isabelle is terrific. My favorite Slytherin.
James and his twins are great also.
Ch.9 - - Hurrah!!!!
I just knew Harry could do it.