Fair storyline, but I am so tired of needless, illogical and poorly written deaths. The scene where Xassie die was poorly written and illogical. It is a common flaw with many of tese stories by almost all authors. 2 highly magical people walk into a room and do nothing at all? Cut me a break! They are supposed to be her family but don't move at all when a known wnwmy is standing over their daughter/sister and just stand there? And Cassie just lays there watching the green light coming at her without trying to get out of the way / dodge the curse? Where is the victims survival instincts, will to live. I'm sorry I just find those types of scenes totally unrealistic. Just all in all poor writing.
But that is just my take on this type of scene. For the mmost part the story is well written, well thought out and entertaining.
Awesome chapter!!!Although i wish Cassie wasn't dead...I hope you update soon!!Thanks for uploading!!!
This last chapter is excellent and your writing style does not disappoint. I have been a strong Harry/Ginny fan since CoS. I have read other stories but nothing has a hold like Harry/Ginny. I do greatly look forward to the next chapter. Thanks for bring it back
your writing styles seems different, id maybe even say improved. worth the wait
Cheers. A lot has changed for me since I wrote the last chapter, so nice to know I haven't lost too much ground.
Great chapter. I hope you will continue to update this story. Are you ending it here or are you going to continue it?
No, the story still isn't finished - and I've not abandoned it per se. My biggest problem is that my ship preference has changed rather drastically recently (from H/G to Harry/Susan. I blame old-crow), so H/G is getting harder to write - and HPMM was never going to be anything else. I'll keep slogging away as I can, but don't expect updates too frequently. They will come, though.
:O your alive! iv read the whole thing about 5 times an still get disapointed at it not being finished even though i know its coming lols welcome back mr milamber ;)
Cheers! The next chapter might be a while, but it WILL be out. Eventually. Hopefully a bit sooner than two years...
Noooooooooooooooo! I know you kept Cassie further away, but you didn't have to kill her! Save her please!
However what I am most annoyed about is the cliffhanger. You had better be still writing! :)