Reviews For History - Retold

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Reviewer: hedwig_edwiges (Signed)
01/14/2006 05:14 am
i don't think harry would just gulp downh slytherin attitude. he is too much like the dursleys. that didn't sound so natural after all.

Author's Response: Well... each to their own, This was my first attempt at characterisation of someone else's character. I find original characters sooo much easier. You'll have to forgive my first fiction I'm afraid, for a learnt a lot from the seven or so fictions I have actually completed. I suppose my normal way of doing things just doesn't fit with HP...

Chapter 3. Never Trust a Slimly Slytherin
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Reviewer: Lionz_4_the_Cup (Signed)
01/12/2006 07:40 pm
another awesome chapter-a little confusing, at least to me,- but i was able to understand most of it. great writing, looking foreword to a update soon!

Author's Response: I'm sorry if it was a little confusing. I wanted to draw out what was happening originally. I'm glad you are enjoying and hope to hear more from you! Thanks for the kind review.

Chapter Two. Welcome to Merry Olde London
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Reviewer: Lionz_4_the_Cup (Signed)
01/11/2006 05:48 pm
that was another great chapter! i noticed a few grammer mistakes, but it was awesome all the same. great job, i like how the first chapter was in the present, but the 2nd was in the past. creative! nice descriptions, overall. I think, with Harry being from future times, that he will have some sort of advantage over everyone else. dont tell me the answer, i want to find out. again, awesome writing, keep it up. cant wait to read more!

Author's Response: If you like time travel and founders... well just about all my fictions... wait ALL my fictions have one or the other or both. I think the secret behind myself is picking something you really want to read yourself... there isn't nearly enough time travel to the founder's age (and finished) out there. Don't worry this is a completed work so it is already finished along with the sequel. All I will say about Harry's situation is that it is *interesting*. *Winks* Thanks for the review, my friend.

Chapter One. Devil's Spawn
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Reviewer: Warlock (Anonymous)
01/11/2006 02:30 pm
Good but Harry had put his wand away when he was expelliarmused and you saw it goes from his hand. I thought only one d-eater followed him through?

Author's Response: I don't know, scratches head. I wrote this months ago my very first attempt... so I'll have to look in to it. Thanks for your kind review... I'm confused with the death eater numbers too! So that makes two of us.

Chapter One. Devil's Spawn
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Reviewer: Warlock (Anonymous)
01/10/2006 04:50 pm
Interesting idea... Though I think Harry was a bit out of character, though you did manage to contrast this with his thoughts which was a good way of doing it. Keep it coming!

Author's Response: This was my first ever fanfic. I'm originally a original works person so I find building my own characters easier than burrowing. I think I'm getting better in my later fictions. I'm glad you like my constrast with thoughts. Will be regular updates as this fic and sequel and accompanying fiction were all finshed before HBP, a chapter or so a day will be submitted unless I've gotten myself eaten. Thanks for your kind review. It is a pleasure to share my work.

Prologue - The Phone Call
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Reviewer: Lionz_4_the_Cup (Signed)
01/10/2006 04:31 pm
thats one of the best stories i have read. seriously, that was awesome. great job, cant wait to read more!

Author's Response: I hope you continue to read and enjoy. It is a pleasure sharing. Will be continuous updating so more has already been posted. Thank you for your time it was muchly appreciated. ~ Illeanah

Prologue - The Phone Call
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