That had me laughing...It's always nice to have some humour. *laughs* I love how you put those small things in there that make the story funny, and you don't have a big funny scene, but some small things together, instead. (And that probably made no sense, hehe.) Great job, as always!
Author's Response: (Are you British, Luna?) I think that made sense: it's more the small things that make it funny. *beams* That's exactly what I was aiming for!
LoL... once again, I am the first mate of the Chasing a Flower ship and I love this story. It's wonderful too as you are taking things from just about every L/J story ever written, including mine! Perfect.
Author's Response: I think I had to do the most extensive research for this chapter, since there's so many cliche's. But I'm glad that you thought it paid off!
The jelly bean story was terrific, and I actually am a member of Gingerly Witty, so nicely done. The second story made me laugh too... the whole "Hermione-senses-tingling" wonderful.
Author's Response: I've seen you on MNFF, Gem; you're a pretty big H/G shipper, aren't you? I was a bit worried when I wrote it, since I'm primarily D/Hr and spent a lot more time on that part of it...but thanks!
Brilliant! I loved the Mary Sue jokes, especially. I am not sure if you nailed all of the cliches, but you covereda good many of them. Very nice job!
Author's Response: I'm not sure it would be possible to cover all of them in one chapter without making it several thousand words long--I think 2500 is long enough!
ROFL Now I know which fic I modded. I love the "Cross over to the Darkside" part, couldn't stop laughing at that! How you ended it was perfect, and I love this fic. Great job, can't wait for the next chapter!! *laughs*
Author's Response: Oh, you were my mod? I must be unhinged since this chapter was only validated a couple days ago. I'm currently fleshing out the next chapter; hopefully it won't take me long.
ROFL That was so funny! I couldn't stop laughing at the "Touch!" part, since when my brother and I first saw that, we used to do it to each other all the time. I loved how you ended it, great job!! *goes to read next chapter*
Author's Response: Thanks! I always try to end my chapters on a random note. ;-)