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Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
04/21/2006 06:18 pm
A very well-done characterization, and the last line was stellar. Good job.

Author's Response: Thanks ladylarna! It's great getting everyone's reviews! If you liked this one you might want to check out my other stories and if you like those, take a look at my novel length (unfinished) on www.harrypotterfanfiction.com!

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Reviewer: WiCkEd (Signed)
04/03/2006 05:03 pm
*applause* Amazing. I loved this story... wow. You made me really feel bad for Regulus. It gave me a new perspective on him. Great job, loved it!!


Author's Response: Thanks WiCKED...I'm really glad you liked it! I tried to put as much of how I thought he would have felt into it as possible. Thanks once again!

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Reviewer: Lionz_4_the_Cup (Signed)
01/08/2006 07:55 pm
that was awesome! great detail. i like how you ended it, nice writing.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. I have really taken a liking to one-shots, I find they are easier to put a lot of 'soul' into them and terefore they come out better. If you liked this, I have two other one-shots on this site and a novel length on www.freewebs.com/aimlesswanderers.

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Reviewer: Lisa (StepUpTimneh) (Anonymous)
01/08/2006 07:50 pm
Wow, that was fantastic! Thank you for filling in that gap- you made it believable that RAB is Regulas Abraxas Black. I noticed a few grammar errors here and there, such as a misplaced comma, or no comma where needed. Some of your sentences were a little run on, but still good. Also, where Regulus mutters to himself, you should have a comma in the quote. You ended on a dramatic note, and made me gasp. Great piece of work here, it was really good!

Author's Response: Thanks for your review! It is always good to recieve notices of bad grammar, ect. I will altar it a.s.a.p. however, I wrote this fic yesterday in quite a short space of time and have not had a chance to edit it yet. If you liked this, I have two other one-shots on this site and a novel length on www.freewebs.com/aimlesswanderers and www.harrypotterfanfiction.com

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