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Reviewer: Golden_Snitch (Signed)
04/16/2006 08:46 am
Erm, so Dobby is having trouble letting go/is a little crazy/in denial? Very well written, if a little confusing to me.


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Reviewer: Roxy (Signed)
02/16/2006 12:42 am
It made me cry! Such a great little story! I really enjoyed it even though it made me sad. You did a great job writing in Dobby's POV. At first, I was like, why the heck is Dobby muttering to himself, he's not Kreacher, but it makes perfect sense and, even before you mentioned it, I knew. Great job with it.


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Reviewer: Madeline Fabray (Signed)
02/02/2006 12:03 am
Oh my gosh, that has to be one of the saddest stories I have ever read. You wrote this beautifully. It's not easy to spot at first what is wrong, but bit by bit, as the pieces come together, you just read in mute horror at poor Dobby's routine. The addition of the poem was a nice touch, and the clock and the ticking of time excellent. All else I can say is...wow. I'm still stunned.


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Reviewer: Megan Hogan (Signed)
01/09/2006 07:37 am
Wow... That was really intense. It was a good idea I realised what was going on when the POtter's didn't eat their breakfast but the date on Dobby's calander gave an added impact. Well done!


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Reviewer: LunaMoon224 (Signed)
01/06/2006 05:59 pm
That was so sad...Poor Dobby. I was wondering what happened in the beginning, but I was feeling so sorry for him at the end. I love how you kept basing the parts of the day around the clock, but I was so sad when it got destroyed at the end. Great job!!!


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