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Reviewer: ladylarna (Signed)
11/21/2006 10:47 am
Clearly, I took your advice to read your other stories. ;) This one had really strong emotion, and it was compelling. Again, just try developing your pieces into something longer - that, or try confining yourself to a specific small wordcount (like 100 words). For a story like this, try and make your word choice more precise and make every sentence really count... you have a lot of potential, and I'd really love to see something of yours fully polished and brought to full potential. :)

Author's Response: Thanks, it's really encouraging to read reviews like this...i will be taking my fcs down asap to edit them! Megan Hogan xx



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Reviewer: Nicole (Anonymous)
01/06/2006 06:00 pm
Nice. You did an excellent job of displaying Ginny's despair. I didn't like the last paragraph because it switched from first person point of view to third. It threw me off track. Maybe things went a little faster than necessary as well. A little more description would have been nice, especially when we realised the Harry had died. I felt like I had been dragged through a hedge backwards. Like I said, I love the description. Indeed, that is very much how it feels. I love it.

Author's Response: Thanks for your review! Constructive critisism is always good to get as well as praise and you have given me a nice mix here. I wrote this fic quite quickly as all the ideas for it came into my head whilst I was walking from a lesson back to house for break and I had to get it down a.s.a.p. I am in the process of editing all my fics. If you liked this one, why not try reading (and reviewing) my other 2 fics.



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Reviewer: LunaMoon224 (Signed)
01/06/2006 04:19 pm
*laughs at the review before her* I love how it ended, very nicely done. I couldn't help but feel sorry for Ginny, losing Harry because of Voldy. Great job!!

Author's Response: Wow...you seem to really like my fics! I would be very interested to read some of yours as we obviously have similar views on HP. Once again... thank you for your review, I love reading them, good and bad. Happy New Year.



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Reviewer: GinnyRox (Signed)
01/06/2006 04:15 pm
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH!!!!!!! Did she kill herself? PLEASE tell me!

Author's Response: Hi. Thanks for reviewing! Ginny did not kill her self but she literally, lost the will to live. Carry on reading and reviewing and if you liked this one, I have 2 other fics up at the moment.



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