Evil, evil cliffie. I love the scene in the shop. Very funny stuff.
Bill
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the comments! I'm glad you approve of my representation of Harry and Ginny's characters. I can only hope I continue to write to your liking! Thank you again! :-)
Very well done, so far. I think you've captured both Harry and Ginny perfectly. It can be hard to avoid cliche when writing the two of them. This is a very bittersweet moment for them, and I think you've gotten it just right.
Bill