Reviews For In Your Dreams

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Reviewer: CynthiaPotter (Signed)
01/04/2006 10:16 pm
*smiles* Wonderful Start! Sounds just like real diary entries. :) I'm looking forward to seeing how everything will work out. Aw, James is so cute. What's nice is that as I'm reading I can picture what kind of expression she would have and the events in my head. That's a good thing, btw. I like how you skip some days. Makes it seem more realistic. I personally only write in mine maybe once every other week and only when I have something to talk about. Mostly venting my frustration with something or another. I like how you made the mothers actually talk to each other. and I'm really looking forward to the christmas vacation. Good job. :D


Book I: September
Reviewer: GryffinGal (Signed)
01/04/2006 08:29 pm
This is really good. I'm a little confused about the contract - Why would Lily's parents make a deal with James's parents? But all in all, this was awesome, and I can't wait for more!

Author's Response: I am not sure if you got my email.. about what I said :( sorry. If you did great if you didnt I will reveal everything in the next two or three chapters. I am almost done with the next chapter, and I will alert you too. P.S. Her sickness will be revealed next time!



Book I: September
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