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Reviewer: Lionz_4_the_Cup (Signed)
03/17/2006 08:09 pm
that was very interesting, how Dumbledore is going to tell the Order about the prophecy.  it will change the whole ending of the story, probably. great job. nice start.



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Reviewer: Simple_Plan (Signed)
01/16/2006 12:42 pm
Awesome! I loved how you gave Harry another sibling. I also loved how you did the part where the doctor was just talking, and you could figure out everything else that was going on just by his reactions. 10!


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Reviewer: Simple_Plan (Signed)
01/16/2006 12:38 pm
Wow, I loved your beginning! This is going to be such a great story!! 10!


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Reviewer: LunaMoon224 (Signed)
01/02/2006 10:52 am
That was a nice start, I like how you put in there what happened when the prophecy was first recited. I'm glad in this one Dumbledore is going to tell the Order. Great job!!!

Author's Response: Reallllllllllllly?? I am so very flattered! I'll try to update as soon as possible. Do you think I need a beta?



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