The crowd cheered as Sirius carried his prize into the castle..... wow... had i written something like that i would have women organisations after my throat..lol
i liked the chapter a lot... although small concrit..... the Yule ball is a part of the triwizard tournament, which hasn't happened for fifty years.... now this ball is supposed to be similar to a Yule ball, but I don't think many people, wizard borns or muggle borns know about the ball being a part of the tournament... .thats enough ranting
Well Yuletide means Christmastime so Yule Ball is really a Christmas Ball. That's what I'm going for here. You'll see in later chapters that there's a reason Dumbledore wants to promote house unity. stay tuned...
well i was totally wrong ..... red and gold lol.... nice work.... it's very gripping
Author's Response: glad you're making connections.....thanks for the review! chapter 9 will be up soon and with it, a quidditch match!
Oooh... love it! I enjoyed the Sirius/Alexis interaction, and the James-chating-after-Lily-and-Lily-playing-hard-to-get stuff. Great job!
I also liked the bit about the threat to the minister... a lovely way to being to work Voldemort into the story. :)
Thanks so much! I'm happy you liked the minister bit. It took me awhile to come up with a suitable name and backstory for him.
Miss Radcliffe :)
thanks so much for your heartening reviews! i'm glad you like it so far. i'm having a bit of trouble getting the next chapter up. this one is also not quite long enough for the mod's liking. i'll have it up as soon as i can!
Author's Response: oh thanks! so glad you liked it!